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Lalamusa
Contributed by
zbashir06
on
Saturday, 28th January 2012 @ 09:38:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I went to a village,
called Lalamusa
There was a lot of noise
and so much confusion,
unpaved roads,
and horse drawn carts
making a life here
is a work of art
buffuloes being led
to the watering hole
bodies so thin
you can count thier bones
hundreds of vendors
fill the tiny bazaar
each claiming their product
is the cheapest by far
getting bored,
i sat on the roof
watched children cut kites
and pigeons fly the coop
beggars roam
knocking door to door
you will be the fool
if you beleive they are poor....
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zbashir06
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2012-01-28 09:38:21]
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Re: Lalamusa
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by girish on
Saturday, 28th January 2012 @ 06:58:59 PM AEST
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| beggars are really untaxed and they save a lot by reducing their needs for amenities |
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Re: Lalamusa
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by ICEKASH on
Tuesday, 31st January 2012 @ 08:28:26 AM AEST
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| Nice try my fellow Paki buddy |
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Re: Lalamusa
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by ICEKASH on
Tuesday, 31st January 2012 @ 08:28:26 AM AEST
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| Nice try my fellow Paki buddy |
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Re: Lalamusa
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by ICEKASH on
Tuesday, 31st January 2012 @ 08:32:20 AM AEST
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| Nice try my fellow Paki buddy |
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