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I ONLY WANTED YOU
Contributed by
irislioness
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Friday, 27th January 2012 @ 04:40:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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They say memories are golden
well maybe this is true.
I never wanted memories,
I only wanted you.
A million times I needed you,
a million times I cried.
If love alone could have saved you
you never would have died.
In life I loved you dearly,
In death I love you still.
Inside my heart you hold a place
no one could ever fill.
If tears could build a stairway
and heartache make a lane,
I'd walk the path to heaven
and bring you home again.
The family chain is broken,
and nothing seems the same.
But as God calls us one by one,
the chain will link again.
Vicky Holder ©
(In memory of my beloved CHIHUAHUA BABY)
Copyright ©
irislioness
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2012-01-27 16:40:20]
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Re: I ONLY WANTED YOU
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th January 2012 @ 05:38:42 PM AEST
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Even though this is sad, it has a nice rhyme scheme. Flows well and written well.
Sorry for your loss. It's the sad thing about owning pets.
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Re: I ONLY WANTED YOU
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by richard2 on
Friday, 27th January 2012 @ 05:57:42 PM AEST
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I really like this. It conveys the sadness and grief with sensitivity and grace. It has some great lines.
"If tears could build a stairway" is excellent.
Thank you for a fine poem.
Richard
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Re: I ONLY WANTED YOU
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by JERRYDA on
Saturday, 28th January 2012 @ 01:40:00 AM AEST
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| you will get her stare at you from heaven wit tears in her eyes. More ink to ur pen |
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