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COUNTRY DAYS
Contributed by
emystar
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Thursday, 26th January 2012 @ 12:52:08 AM in AEST
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Running barefoot in the meadow so fair
Sun beaming put sparkle in her hair.
Yes, I can see them good ole days
From sun up to sun down we'd play
Out away from city lights we'd roam.
Country days in our country home.
Life so simple, free, we'd roam and play
Long ago our carefree country days.
In the neighbors creek we'd swim
Everything so simple back then.
Chasing fireflies after dark
We was happy as a meadow lark.
To the garden we'd roam free
Picking fresh tomatoes to eat
Gathering eggs from the pen
Oh how I miss days back then.
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by JERRYDA on
Thursday, 26th January 2012 @ 07:08:59 AM AEST
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| even av never been there you make me feel like i am in the past |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by shelby on
Thursday, 26th January 2012 @ 06:56:23 PM AEST
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Emy this is such a delight to read.
Thanks for sharing. You reminded me of the good times as well. Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by girish on
Friday, 27th January 2012 @ 06:08:09 PM AEST
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| Emy, my in-laws have agriculture as profession. days will be heavenly when I go there life is very easy and happy in country regions |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by richard2 on
Saturday, 28th January 2012 @ 01:40:19 PM AEST
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A great read, You describe my childhood on the farm
with finesse, fireflys at all. |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 2nd February 2012 @ 09:26:11 PM AEST
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I come from a country background as well
with plowing, cows, horses, pigs, and chickens,
and some great memories of those hard but
good days. Thank you for this write and for all
of your sweet comments here at YPDC!
Blessings, Rob |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 4th February 2012 @ 09:11:36 PM AEST
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ahh
so sweet and
serene,
I love you emy!!!!!!!! |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by Skippa109 on
Thursday, 1st March 2012 @ 04:57:35 PM AEST
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| Definitely paints a beautiful, innocent picture. Very talented :) |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd March 2012 @ 07:36:04 PM AEST
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Ah, if only we could go back. NICE!!!
Ever see the Twilight Zone where they all turn back into kids when they play kick the can? Maybe we can go back. Maybe that's heaven. |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by spud on
Saturday, 10th March 2012 @ 01:02:08 PM AEST
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Ah yes ... those halcyon days!
Thank you, Emy - I was transported.
Tommy
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by doug on
Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 02:27:52 PM AEST
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I love when a poem just makes you feel good after having read it. This one did that for me.
Thank you for taking me back to those times.
truly , doug |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by colinb on
Saturday, 26th January 2013 @ 07:20:27 PM AEST
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| excellently written i live in the country my closest nieghbour is 5km away. |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 04:23:17 PM AEST
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so enlightening and refreshing, wow girl, taking
me back to the firefly days! lol, truly beautiful, one
of your sweetest writes,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 26th February 2018 @ 05:44:30 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. The days that really mattered! |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by Durango on
Friday, 16th March 2018 @ 04:04:26 PM AEST
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| I miss those days too. I felt the country air all over again. Days of youth always remain, I/'/m glad you/'/re writing /'/bout those days of yours. This poem has the flow of a song without a chorus. I enjoy it as it is. |
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Re: COUNTRY DAYS
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by pooja on
Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 03:24:14 AM AEST
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| Reminded me of Heidi somehow. These days I am pausing more and more and wondering how worthwhile living in the City really is when there is no clean air to breathe. Your poem took me to an idyllic place where I long to be :) Great write , may we all be as happy as larks and may you too get your drop of country sunshine ! |
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