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ECLIPSE
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 08:14:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You looked up at the same moon.
Our eyes beheld it's light.
Though many miles between us,
Our hearts still joined that night.
I knew at that pure moment,
Our sight crossed paths in flight.
I could sense my feelings soaring,
Love for you had gained new heights.
Once again back in your presence
I saw you gaze up toward the stars.
The moon was shining brightly,
And in the distance there was Mars.
In the vastness of this splendor,
My eyes were frozen on only you.
My universe stood in front of me.
My treasure stood there too.
Whenever I see an eclipse,
Or a full moon or blue sky.
I see your vision standing there
As the apple of my eye!
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robert_edgar_burns
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2012-01-23 20:14:08]
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Re: ECLIPSE
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by alwaysthinking on
Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 09:04:49 PM AEST
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| I love the way the poem seemed it could be part of a song in a love movie. |
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Re: ECLIPSE
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by girish on
Tuesday, 24th January 2012 @ 03:19:20 AM AEST
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| you have really robbed us all what a love, personification, metaphoric statements nice poem. I love this poem as the love implied in it. I had written a lot of love poems this is very nice. |
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Re: ECLIPSE
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by Tracy on
Tuesday, 24th January 2012 @ 07:21:19 AM AEST
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"You looked up at the same moon.
Our eyes beheld it's light.
Though many miles between us,
Our hearts still joined that night.
I knew at that pure moment,
Our sight crossed paths in flight."
Love this. I'm sure you connected with every person. I know I've done this. : ) Loved the ending about her being the apple of his eye no matter what he sees. So romantic! : )
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Re: ECLIPSE
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by Shadowman on
Tuesday, 24th January 2012 @ 10:12:56 AM AEST
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| I have to say, I believe I have read all of your poems so far and this one right here stands as my favorite. Keep up the good work. ^^ |
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