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Rise from ashes of burnt past
Contributed by
discov
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Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 06:16:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I never felt this way before
broken,bruised and drowned in my tears
but i'll never let it take me down
cant keep running away, cried over it enough
with all negativity around
I'll stand strong and turn it around
I'll rescript my cursed destiny
wont let the hope to live die again
I'll Rise above with confidence and conquer the time
will paint my dairaies white again with peace and freedom
With a true spirit and desire so strong
Solitary Walks will make me feel and heal again
will try to right the wrong in me
and rise from the ashes of burnt past
discov, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit if you wish to continue posting.
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Re: Rise from ashes of burnt past
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 07:04:50 PM AEST
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Strong, powerful write.
Good work.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Rise from ashes of burnt past
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by girish on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 08:53:14 PM AEST
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| hope and faith are the medicines of mind with disease yur poem exhibits the same nice write keep writing |
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Re: Rise from ashes of burnt past
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by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 22nd January 2012 @ 07:10:09 AM AEST
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Dear discov ,
Your positive poems is a lesson
Your words spread real wisdom
I feel immensely guided by you
Thanks dear for your great write.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
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