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Love tree
Contributed by
MissMichelle
on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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She hides in a place
seems to be
a lovers tree
She climbs the love
and pick a place in lee
she sits and wonder
how life can be
without this tree
This wonderful place
that makes you free
Where the branch speaks
and keeps me high over the ground
where I'm safe
This love tree can only be
If you believe
and if you'r ready to see!
Copyright ©
MissMichelle
... [
2003-05-04 20:05:00]
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Re: Love tree
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 09:32:53 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed the poem, but was confused about the point of view, first person, etc. Keep on writing. |
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Re: Love tree
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by norm on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 10:50:01 AM AEST
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I love your thinking...we all need a place
to feel safe...a tree branch seems a likely
place to hide from the world of pain.. |
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Re: Love tree
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 07:28:53 PM AEST
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| Hey this is sweet and nices. |
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Re: Love tree
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by arakrune on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:39:23 PM AEST
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i like this
love yur writing |
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