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The Red Color
Contributed by
Anu
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Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 09:23:50 AM in AEST
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abstract
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It had a color,
They called it red..
Was a bright and deep blend..
To some it looked like fire,
With the rage and sharp glaze,
Reality was something that no one could gauge...
Slowly, it became darker,
Started carrying poise & elegance,
And all that came with the tough times spent..
Drop by drop the color fell,
Started mixing with water,
And underwent a gradual change...
It started spreading in water,
Just hoping to mix well,
To the world,it appeared like a fairytale..
It started loosing its own color,
The bright red was gone,
Lost its existence,in a world unknown.....
Copyright ©
Anu
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2012-01-21 09:23:50]
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Re: The Red Color
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by richard2 on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 01:02:58 PM AEST
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A abstract painting in words. A thinking man's poem.
Well worth remembering and considerating in the future. Fine writing.
Richard
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Re: The Red Color
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 02:11:21 PM AEST
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Very deep write.
God work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: The Red Color
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by girish on
Sunday, 22nd January 2012 @ 12:11:51 AM AEST
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| red is for indicating danger but white is for peace not only that it is the base for any color you can paint red to white as well bring back the red to white. |
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Re: The Red Color
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by girish on
Sunday, 22nd January 2012 @ 12:11:52 AM AEST
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| red is for indicating danger but white is for peace not only that it is the base for any color you can paint red to white as well bring back the red to white. |
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Re: The Red Color
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 03:34:00 PM AEST
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yes
I like this
yes.... |
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