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Land off dreams
Contributed by
MissMichelle
on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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When i close my eyes
your always there
takes my hand and walk me
to the land of dreams
so brightly-coloured,
flowers of sorts you never seen
creature,but they're not like a human being
flying,dancing,singing in a peaceful Harmonie
beaches with golden sand
in a place called neverland
reality doesn't fit me
that's why I wish I could stay with you forever,
to escape the world and never have to go back.
the spiteful of the world
and the emptiness of love and fantasy
makes me so sick of pain it will always remain
i just sit in my room and wait for you to come and get me
to take me away from this
cold,dark,and empty world
Copyright ©
MissMichelle
... [
2003-05-04 20:05:00]
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Re: Land off dreams
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by BlackFire9786 on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 07:08:08 PM AEST
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Wow, i really liked this poem, dreams are so much better than reality! i too wish i could just live in them forever without coming back! (at least the good ones) Great thoughtful poem!
Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: Land off dreams
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by DreamCatcher on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 09:50:14 PM AEST
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Wow, I can really relate. I have my own dreamland, as I think everyone should. Every person needs an excape from the limits of reality, a chance to fly free throu a lnd of drems.
Sarah Bakura |
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