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Missing You
Contributed by
ellewood
on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 06:33:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I look up at the sky
and I wonder why
why is there sadness and pain
what is the purpose
what will it gain
its hard because I wont see you for a while
oh how I miss your beautiful eyes and delightful smile
your big strong arms to show me you care
and all the secrets that we share
we write and talk on the phone
but there are times I feel so alone
inside it hurts so much
because I long for your touch
being with you I knew what was at stake
this was a choice that I was glad to make
but I will not lie
for sometimes I do cry and do you want to know why
because I miss everything about you
each and every day
and I want to show you I love you
in every possible way
without you I would be lost
I want to be with you
no matter the cost
you are the love of my life
and thank you for loving me
and it is with you forever
that I want to be
Copyright ©
ellewood
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2012-01-19 18:33:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Missing You
(User Rating: 1 ) by FFRW99 on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 07:58:30 PM AEST (User
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Dear Elewood,
this is the best one yet and I feel sorry for you that someone you care about the most is not with you or able to be with you. LOVE your work and your writing too.. Please keep it up... |
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Re: Missing You
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 08:33:25 PM AEST (User
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Sad but awesome writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Missing You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lide on
Sunday, 22nd January 2012 @ 04:47:14 AM AEST (User
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i felt the same way.. the pain is unbearable.. but he is coming back... so don't worry be happy. Just wait 4 that day :) my only regret is why.. didn't i think of writing such poetry.. i'm an idiot : |
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