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Death of a Summer
Contributed by
Tracy
on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 05:09:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Bloodstained leaves trickle from trees;
wounded parchment vessels smearing northern breath.
Thunderheads whip a colorless sky
while the somnolent sun surrenders
to a graveyard of rotting tombs.
This season is a fertile crypt.
Copyright ©
Tracy
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2012-01-19 05:09:29]
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Re: Death of a Summer
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by spud on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 06:36:17 AM AEST
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Hi again,
You are a talented lady. I love the
contradiction in words ''fertile crypt'' - yet it
describes the setting perfectly.
Will be checking your page regularly from now
on.
Tommy
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Re: Death of a Summer
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 20th January 2012 @ 01:17:29 PM AEST
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Packs a lot of great imagery into a small space.
Wonderful use of words.
Steve |
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Re: Death of a Summer
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th January 2012 @ 12:06:56 PM AEST
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Wow! Now see, that's legitate to me cause that's all I got. Hmmmm... I've got scarey and sort of morbid for my reactive adjectives but sorry, again, no critique cause this be blowin' me away!!! Hence, the "wow".
Thanks,
Tim
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