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Lifeboats
Contributed by
thumbsucker
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Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 11:11:29 AM in AEST
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LIFEBOATS
Bobbing on the water,
far out on a sea,
countless little lifeboats
each moving separately.
In each little lifeboat,
sits a different soul.
Staying on the surface,
seems the common goal.
A few little lifeboats,
are rowing very fast.
Must want a patch of ocean,
or they don`t like being passed.
Some lifeboats are sinking.
Nothing anyone can do.
Only one per boat.
When they`re sunk, they`re through.
One boat is slowing down.
There`s hardly any motion.
Just a soul contemplating,
what`s it doing on the ocean.
Copyright ©
thumbsucker
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2002-08-04 11:11:29]
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Re: Lifeboats
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by Suzy on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 01:22:29 PM AEST
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Lovely write here and had a nice chuckle at your author's comment...
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Re: Lifeboats
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 02:07:19 PM AEST
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hmm... what are we doing on the ocean? Another great write Gary!!! And I had a good laugh at your author's comment... thanks for the smile!
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Re: Lifeboats
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 02:06:40 AM AEST
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I remember this one well Gary...loved it then, love it now. It's nice others can share it over here.
Love Chrissie x |
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Re: Lifeboats
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by chatabox on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 06:59:55 AM AEST
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Perfection.......thats all I can say, oh except, yes theres always an except....I could so picture this......gave me a giggle and it jigged along with the bobbing along.
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Re: Lifeboats
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by humphdj on
Friday, 23rd August 2002 @ 09:05:38 AM AEST
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I loved this too...........and it does sort of bob along nicely............Magic!
Rgds
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Re: Lifeboats
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by LJ on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:09:41 AM AEST
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haven't seen you on here in a while, so I thought I would drop in and read some of the old, but good stuff.
LJ |
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