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Hurt to the bone.....all alone
Contributed by
MissMichelle
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Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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He gives another smile
trying to say everything will be alright
to show that he cares
but he knows it wont get by
he doesn't know what to say
just closes he's eyes and prays
she refused to see the true
life ain't like your youth
she stopt to live
just laying in her bed and waiting for something to fulfil
all feelings are gone
shes hurt to the bone
He sites by her bed
holding her hand
saying he will help find her magical land
she dosen't say a word
pale,cold and unware
starring up in nowhere
scars left on her wrists
made in her very deep mists
when tears did't help
and screams did't felt
and this is her way to say........I'm not OK
Copyright ©
MissMichelle
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2003-05-04 20:05:00]
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Re: Hurt to the bone.....all alone
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by norm on
Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 07:47:11 PM AEST
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| wow...you write with such pathos |
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Re: Hurt to the bone.....all alone
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 01:38:32 PM AEST
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| Wow that was very touching and yet so sad. Hope everything going to be alright. Lovely write. |
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Re: Hurt to the bone.....all alone
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by arakrune on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:32:50 PM AEST
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