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Finally Finding Paradise.
Contributed by
moogster
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Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 06:26:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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When there's an end to greed
and gold turns to dust
and there's enough food to feed everyone
and real justice replace the unjust
and when those who suffer suffer no more
and hate is replaced by love
and finally there's an end to war
and sorrow is replaced by happiness
and all your dreams come true
and there's no need to fear no more
and people gladly share everything with you
and everyone calls you their friend
and baron deserts bloom again
and you can walk safely by the shore
and see golden sunsets forever more
We will have finally found paradise.
Peter Dome. Copyright. 2012.
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moogster
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2012-01-16 06:26:38]
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Re: Finally Finding Paradise.
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by girish on
Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 11:38:09 PM AEST
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| It will happen soon everybody will become dependent on another for the increasing cost of living |
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Re: Finally Finding Paradise.
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by MrJewsbury on
Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 01:58:38 PM AEST
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Such a lovely poem, The last three lines painted the image of a couple holding hands walking down the beach at sunset, the water calmly drifting along the sand. Paradise.
Really well done, keep up the good work |
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