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Neverending story
Contributed by
MissMichelle
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Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
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Under the bridge
by the sea
theres a question for you and me
why are we,and how could this be?
a neverending story, that sets you free
where are the magic gone
I've been searching for so long,
where are the tones in a long lost love song,
blessed was i, to be alone
cause all they do is being wrong
you may think I'm the freak
but look in the mirror and finde your seek
Never judge,what you dont know
never plead something that isent so
cause it will hurt,more then you'll never know!
Copyright ©
MissMichelle
... [
2003-05-04 20:05:00]
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Re: Neverending story
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by norm on
Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 07:44:12 PM AEST
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| Nicely done |
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Re: Neverending story
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by PhantomsLDY on
Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 10:03:17 PM AEST
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| Great write!! |
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Re: Neverending story
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:01:19 PM AEST
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| Not really inspired by the book or film.But a decent poem none the less. |
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Re: Neverending story
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by tormentedpixie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 05:21:24 PM AEST
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| Very nicly written! Enjoyed this poem a lot. |
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Re: Neverending story
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by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:47:34 AM AEST
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| Good poem. So long as you find your words Titles will come later. This one is appropriate for this poem. |
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Re: Neverending story
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 09:27:11 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this!
It is really calm and peaceful to me!
Kind of soothing, I like a lot of your stuff
Good write! |
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