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Rain Will Fall
Contributed by
ever1der
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Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 05:28:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Rain will fall for summer's gone
Moisture now to settle dust.
Drops descend upon the lawn.
Rain will fall for summer's gone.
Moisture rises with dewey mist.
puddles break through hardened crust.
Rain will fall for summer's gone
Moisture now to settle dust.
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ever1der
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2012-01-16 05:28:27]
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Re: Rain Will Fall
(User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 09:11:06 AM AEST
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Not here in Florida! It does not rain
during the winter months or snow
either! LOL! Very nice write!
Blessings, Rob
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Re: Rain Will Fall
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by Spike on
Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 09:16:40 PM AEST
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a hypnotic cadence, nicely worded nature poetry. Much enjoyed, and thanks for being brave and escaping the AABB rhyme scheme!
S. |
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Re: Rain Will Fall
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2014 @ 02:22:06 AM AEST
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this is lovely,
hugs n' love nessa |
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