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Love Torn
Contributed by
RD2012
on
Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 03:47:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I lay alone at night,
my sorrow hidden out of sight,
hoping she will see how much,
i long just to feel her touch,
always I to her; never her to me,
or is it a trick of my brain; cruelty,
I curse myself for my heartache,
too much effort for my love to be fake,
and now with knowledge of another,
at night I fear I may not recover,
she confided maybe she left for no good reason,
and suddenly my pain is easin'
neglected, soon it returns though
and i do honestly know,
that despite your infliction
i will always forgive - you are my addiction
and that i love you
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RD2012
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2012-01-16 03:47:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love Torn
(User Rating: 1 ) by samray33 on
Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 10:09:00 AM AEST (User
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nice, you put it all there and made it flow. I can feel what you're saying |
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Re: Love Torn
(User Rating: 1 ) by nluchett on
Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 10:48:25 AM AEST (User
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nice write. Heartbreaking break-ups stink. but Just remember, with sadness comes reflection and new perspective, behind emerges a deep warm stream of hope! |
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Re: Love Torn
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 10:19:14 PM AEST (User
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i write poems whenever i have a broken heart.. i was once in love, i thought i would die over losing him. but i survived, and i kno u will too! |
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