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confident no more
Contributed by
leannabanana
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Saturday, 14th January 2012 @ 05:26:44 PM in AEST
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I used to be so confident
I used to be so sure
I used to hold my head high when i walked through a door
But now im just a broken shell
of my former self ill lie and hurt
and kick and scream
and let it all come out
Im never going to be the same
and this one things for sure
Ill never ever love again to get hurt agin
once more.
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leannabanana
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2012-01-14 17:26:44]
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Re: confident no more
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by dewittd18 on
Saturday, 14th January 2012 @ 05:36:11 PM AEST
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| Your poem has a lot of strong emotions. I could feel how you feel with each word I read. This poem is absloutly amazing. |
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Re: confident no more
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by NightOwl61 on
Saturday, 14th January 2012 @ 06:53:39 PM AEST
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| an emotional piece, edgy and effecting. A bit of punctuation may add to its effectiveness. Well written of course. tfs |
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