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Midnight Sky
Contributed by
HawLeeScreams
on
Friday, 13th January 2012 @ 04:00:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Fairies dance a midnight sky,
As they are soon to fly.
Taking off without a thought,
As they go to fix this knot.
While keeping a watchful eye,
Until it's your time to say goodbye.
Year after year,
Beer after beer.
Dancing a dance,
That leads into a trance.
For never take the offered wine,
Or you'll never live to see your prime.
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HawLeeScreams
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2012-01-13 16:00:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Midnight Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ciera1423 on
Saturday, 14th January 2012 @ 03:09:15 AM AEST (User
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I like the use of both rhyming as well as some repetition. Very nice. It also matches much of the lore on the subject |
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