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Mountain of Pain
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Friday, 13th January 2012 @ 05:01:48 AM in AEST
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Spit upon the grave of life,
and throw me to the floor,
a rose crushed under heel,
and strike me at the core,
Watch the color fade away,
and i will watch death come,
For i will kill him with a smile,
and chuckle while you run,
for love could never break these chains,
these ghosts that haunt my past,
this freedom brings me naught but pain,
in this place where I am cast...
Haunt me no more... take this curse...
hide it deep within these scars ...
never bring it out again,
and watch me from afar...
bury pain within my soul,
and throw away the key,
watch me burn... but do not weep,
for pain has set me free,
but never let me see the truth,
the truth that i do seek,
a mount of love...buried deep...
beneath these hollow shrieks,
I look inside myself for love,
and find that there is none,
for there is only one alive...
to change what you have done.
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Re: Mountain of Pain
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by BritVent on
Friday, 13th January 2012 @ 05:25:08 AM AEST
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| This is so beautiful, I feel as your telling my story. |
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Re: Mountain of Pain
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by ViperKi on
Friday, 13th January 2012 @ 03:30:46 PM AEST
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| Well written; the composition flows easily and stays consistently true to itself |
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Re: Mountain of Pain
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by PlaguePerfected on
Saturday, 14th January 2012 @ 06:38:02 AM AEST
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| Nicely written. Smile at death, I love it. |
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Re: Mountain of Pain
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 11:26:02 PM AEST
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So sad but beautifully written.
Hope you feel better soon.
Blessings, huggs,
emy
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Re: Mountain of Pain
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by sararawr on
Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 07:25:27 PM AEST
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| I really like this. It's good. It's exactly how i feel. |
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