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An Apology
Contributed by
newplayer96
on
Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 06:10:14 AM in AEST
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ApologyPoetry
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Asked a little too much from life
I was just a boy who was
naive
Whose heart was filled with ignorance
While other's was
filled with patience and tolerance
Sitting here with deep regret
and remorse
Pinned to the ground by an abstract force
Let down
the ones who loved me the most
Not exactly the perfect time to
boast
Back then, I felt that I did try
But now all I can do is
cry
Had the misconception that I did all I could
Now I feel that
all I did was stood
My insides are wailing
Neither are my outsides
restraining
If only I was all that they wanted me to be
My heart would
be filled with glee
The moment has passed
Shadows have been cast
Proving
that I can do better
Just keeps getting harder
Didn't have much to worry
about back then
When I was surrounded by lovely women and men
Life took
quite a sharp turn
Now the tears make my thoughts burn
I let them down,
bad
I'm sorry, mom, and dad.
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newplayer96
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2012-01-12 06:10:14]
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Re: An Apology
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by Banjosandwitch on
Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 07:12:50 AM AEST
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| attonement well put nice 1 |
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Re: An Apology
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by angelus8663 on
Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 07:21:32 AM AEST
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| The poem itself is good and you express yourself well. I'm sure your mum & Dad love you and are proud of you no matter what. |
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Re: An Apology
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by richard2 on
Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 08:58:22 AM AEST
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| A good poem of remorse and regret. In a sense your words reflect the feelings of the prodigal that can never regain the loss of the time spent away from family. I know the feeling well. |
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Re: An Apology
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by dvtpdw on
Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 10:23:22 AM AEST
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| Very well written, your wrods draw the reader to you loss and meaning. Kept me following your path and sorrow. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: An Apology
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by Ellewood on
Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 05:18:36 PM AEST
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| Nicely written --dont give up on your parents ....as I would imagine they wouldnt give up on you.. |
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Re: An Apology
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by girish on
Friday, 13th January 2012 @ 12:53:15 AM AEST
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| you are forgiven the moment you identified your mistakes. To Err is human To forgive is divine. your make your parents divine. |
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Re: An Apology
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by davidcactus on
Thursday, 2nd February 2012 @ 12:39:28 PM AEST
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| Well written and full of sorrow and emotions for the way you live your life in the past, but remember that acknowledgment of your past mistakes is a great step in the right direction. Love your parent and respect them while they are still with you. |
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