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9 Ladies Dancing
Contributed by
boobies
on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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escaped on foot
10 miles west
for heavy blue eyeshadow
and sunshine eternal
Queens and fools dance
'til dawn
in ballrooms crying
for Peace of mind
girls, don't give your
chocolate cake away
to any man begging
for crumbs
when those Queens were
dancing, they knew
who they were
stepping on toes of
the XY 'somes
and laughing it up on
Exit 69
low cut shirts, she attracts
their gaze
but don't forget inside
that chest
beats a person's heart
and i was sure all along
i was one of those
9 Ladies Dancing
i was me
he was him
but no man's hand
can change
my mind
Copyright ©
boobies
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2003-05-04 17:05:00]
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Re: 9 Ladies Dancing
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by Apartment213 on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 11:36:19 PM AEST
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| u know i like this poem...pretty darn good |
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Re: 9 Ladies Dancing
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:55:12 AM AEST
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wonderful job on this poem!! I love it!
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Re: 9 Ladies Dancing
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by kamikazehileray on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 10:01:51 PM AEST
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interesting wording here...enjoyed the read
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Re: 9 Ladies Dancing
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 11:08:26 PM AEST
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wow very very good
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