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Moon , The teacher
Contributed by
ICEKASH
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Wednesday, 11th January 2012 @ 07:49:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The moon tonight
Is a beautiful sight
Though the clouds around it
Keep its glow surrounded
They seems to be friends
And each them tends
To give other a turn
So that people can learn
That it wont be bright always
After this can come the dark days
When happiness would be in the past
But that too can not last
Nothing remains the same
No joys and no pains
But something still tells me tonight
That preety is more with the bright
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ICEKASH
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2012-01-11 07:49:26]
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Re: Moon , The teacher
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by StacyLynnG on
Wednesday, 11th January 2012 @ 09:32:24 AM AEST
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| Reminds me of the Charlie Chaplin quote, "Nothing in this world is permanent, not even your troubles" Nicely done! |
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Re: Moon , The teacher
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by girish on
Friday, 13th January 2012 @ 12:59:10 AM AEST
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well expressed the laws of nature with the objects from nature.
Further away you see the stars
Poles of happiness with no wars
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Re: Moon , The teacher
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 05:20:24 PM AEST
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| I love your rhymes and great poem by the way :) |
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