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Don't mis me dear
Contributed by
kalika_vidya
on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I dwell in the Sun
incandescent always
to give my great energy
I dwell in the Moon
delightful always
to give my happiness
I dwell in stars
invigilent always
to give my hopes and thoughts
I dwell in the hearts of men
as the voice of God
to let you know that
I am your final refuge
When will you listen to me
O dreaming heart !
When will you come to me
O wandering lamb !
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 04:14:14 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC. Absoulutely wonderful
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by darkmind on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 08:39:17 PM AEST
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| i really really like your poem, i put my first up tonight too, although i have come here for months only reading the poetry, this one gives me a good feeling, |
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 10:33:40 PM AEST
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Wonderful write.
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 02:16:11 AM AEST
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| Thank you Dear shari,.. your comment opens a golden gate for me..Kalika |
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 02:19:03 AM AEST
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| Thank you friend, even though you are named dark mind You seemed to have a bright soul..God bless you.. Kalika |
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 02:23:02 AM AEST
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| Hi Michelle..I have seen so many poems of you.. seems very dynamic..hugs for the comment.. Kalika |
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by venkat on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 05:30:35 AM AEST
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| What a pleasent surprise ! Oh, baby, this is very nice..keep it up, keep'm coming on more and more..Blessings..Ah, I feel very happy to see you on this site..venkat |
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 05:50:58 AM AEST
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| Thank you dad..you're my inspiration.. kalika |
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 06:15:22 AM AEST
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| This is a beautifully written poem Kalika.I really like it |
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 07:25:17 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Kalika..Lovely bit of writing here....hope to see lots more...
Thank you for your comment..
Jenni |
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 07:32:16 AM AEST
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| You are a teacher madam..I know your name through my Dad..thank for your kind comment. Kalika |
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Re: Don't mis me dear
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 09:47:51 AM AEST
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Well done on your first here!
Welcome & keep writing!
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