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Like a rose
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Life is like a rose
growing each day
blooming into the person we are
The petals are like our skin
smooth and caress
covering our bodies
The thorns are like our anger
harmful and mad
telling you to keep away
The rain running down the petals
are like our tears
lonely and sad
A rose being warmed by the sun
is like smiling with happiness
And the death of a rose
is like the ending of our own life.
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youngpoet1989
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2003-05-04 14:35:00]
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Re: Like a rose
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:09:45 PM AEST
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Ahhh loved this so true. I liked the similes great job.
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Re: Like a rose
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 04:21:08 PM AEST
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wonderful write...great analogy
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Re: Like a rose
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 10:35:57 PM AEST
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Lovely
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Re: Like a rose
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 09:43:52 PM AEST
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beautiful... simply beautiful..
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