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Winds (Cry) of Destruction
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A howling wind echoes over the roof tops
Houses shake, their foundations crack
Kids cry, and cover their ears
Their faces white with terror
Mothers scream, their shields crumble
As they whimper wishing to hide in a deep hole
Fathers quail, they break, unable to
Protect their families they curse the air
Trees are torn from their roots
And tossed about like a beach ball
The darkness is grim and heavy
Settling on those like a cancerous sore
The silence whispers down the empty streets
And gnaws away at life itself
Sirens go off, men jump at the slightest sound,
As they peer into the inky blackness
Myself, I sit here and scream
Unaware at the destruction and pain I bring
Only realizing myself and the pain that festers
Inside this destroyed shell of a man
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2003-05-04 14:05:00]
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:18:30 PM AEST
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Too close for comfort to the hell of an insane mind.
Nobody could like it but it is a tragicallly good write. |
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 04:23:56 PM AEST
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very intense,,a little too dark for comfort for me,, but a very good write none the less,, your talent shines on this one
Shari |
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 10:38:02 PM AEST
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Iv got too agree with Shari very intense!! I do like it!
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 03:02:05 PM AEST
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wow joel, such a brilliant and intense write, definitely one of the best i've ever read...keep it up love....see you around
Lindsey |
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by mystical_illusion on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 05:16:28 PM AEST
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Wow, i liked this very much, intense yes, dark yes.. but that only makes it better.
Thanks for sharing,
-kelly |
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by Cancer on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 11:33:29 PM AEST
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i loved this joel. one of my favorites. it played out like a weird music video. chaotic and destructive. incredible.
Cancer
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 04:40:31 PM AEST
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I agree with the others about how intense it is, and know only too well where you're coming from. I really like:
The silence whispers down the empty streets
And gnaws away at life itself
take care x_x_x |
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by bopeep on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 12:23:51 AM AEST
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| nice twist to it. my mind and heart enjoyed it very much, especially since my mom just told me that "i bring nothing but pain to this family." just has to make u feel special, don't it. loved the poem. keep it up. peace out |
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by kittiekat on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 03:36:34 PM AEST
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| ooooo.....wee...i loved it!! It was a great twist, oh yes, a twist! lol, anywho, ur a great poet and i loved how you described the destruction in ur poem....very good. well, see ya! >^..^< |
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Re: Winds (Cry) of Destruction
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:59:06 AM AEST
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| Yip I loved it. Yet again I loved another of your poems. You always leave us with that feeling of shock at the end of your writing and the poems always stick in my head. You have a great way of making them memorable. Good work ^_^ |
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