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Black dove
Contributed by
Aleali
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Sunday, 8th January 2012 @ 12:19:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When we first met I thought I found my one beautiful dove
But instead I was just blinded by love.
The memories that we shared together
I truley thought we would last forever..
But again I was just blinded by love, not knowing what was yet to come
Memories destroyed me from within,
Remembering myself giving in
When we first met, she was so beautiful and nice,
But truley she was colder than ice.
She told me in notes how much she cared,
But the damage was already done, and couldn't be repaired.
Every night I would pray to god to make everything fine,
But his answer to me was to just resign.
I gave her my heart,soul, and passion,
But I guess that was way to old fashion..
She broke my heart and left me in pain
She crushed my soul, let in rot in the rain
My passionate love that I gave to you,
She rejected it, like if it were the flu
She had everything but a heart
And I thought I was being really smart
By giving this girl all my soul and love
Something that she was so undeserving of
I wish we'd shared more memories together,
I truley thought we would be together forever..
But she tainted our future love,
The Person I thought was my beautiful dove.
It hurts to have to say goodbye..
No more seeing eachother..saying hi
No more walks threw the Park or sharing laughter,
Now it's just one huge disaster.
Her love for me has faded..
Our beautiful memories, she has suffocated..
At one time I wanted her to stay..
But truthfully... All that would do is leave me in dismay..
Copyright ©
Aleali
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2012-01-08 00:19:06]
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Re: Black dove
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th January 2012 @ 01:43:43 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Been there done that more than once.
Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Black dove
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by richard2 on
Sunday, 8th January 2012 @ 06:57:12 AM AEST
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It's a hard road, the feelings expressed in this poem,
but it's a time that most have suffered, I know I have.
All the platitudes cannot rebuild the lovely castle walls that guarded the love. I guess we poets have to become masons for we are constantly rebuiling them.
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Re: Black dove
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by BritVent on
Sunday, 8th January 2012 @ 01:52:06 PM AEST
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| I know the feeling, but don't the pain will soon go away. I like the emotion in here. |
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