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Finding My Purpose
Contributed by
nluchett
on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 02:09:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Up on a mound of doubt I sat
Rain fell and puddles of sorrow collected in the flat
Painful tears rolled down my face
I was ready to leave, what a waste
I looked to the East, for something caught my sight
Took a step forward, and started my hike
Through the forest of redemption I made my descent
A transition to hope, my mind underwent
At the edge of the forest there laid my vision
A sign from above, to just keep living
I crossed a calm stream of excited smiles
There will be more hills to climb, some may be miles
But for now I no longer feel that of worthless
I just lay in the sun in the meadow of purpose.
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2012-01-06 14:09:54]
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Re: Finding My Purpose
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by paulblx on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 03:40:02 PM AEST
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| cool..very cool! |
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Re: Finding My Purpose
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 04:05:04 PM AEST
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| Love your metaphors in this. All the best on your journey.... JenniK |
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Re: Finding My Purpose
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by MyPoetic_Life on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 04:35:41 PM AEST
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| Wow this is really good!! Nice work. |
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