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The Feeling - The Falling

Contributed by The_Lugubrious_Optimist on Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 05:35:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

My breathing falters,
My heartbeat stops,
My motion stutters,
My conscience drops,
My direction uncharted,
My soul convalescent,
My opinion discarded,
My fate unrepentant,

Listen... listen to your mind... listen to your self...

Can you hear its gentle approach? Can you feel its thundering movement?
Can you bridge it’s denial to meet with yours? Will you feed its appetite?

It’s going to hit you, its going knock you off your feet, sweep you to one side, circle around and then repeat.

It’s going to take you, it’s going to shake you and it will chew you up and taste you,

Escape it if you want to, but we know that you don’t want to, fight it if you want to but we know that it will beat you,

Rapture startles all, like a single touch of divinity
Grief begins to fall, like rain from from the plains of infinity,
Time begins to stall, as the universe centres into this singularity,
Love starts to call, and life is seen in unforgiving clarity.

Love, translucent as it seems, is only lucid in your dreams,
Awaken and see its true form, be reborn,

Day and night all at the same time,
Dark and light in the same instant,
Hot and cold become intertwined,
Youth is timeless, time is ancient,

Love does this to all and those that go untouched will never know.
Spiral out of control, but enjoy the descent into never being the same again, you can never be the same again, you will never be the same again.

Say her name, understand what it means to you,
it’s more than a word,
more than a simple association,
it has become your entire existence,
the reason you belong, the reason you don’t belong to anyone but her,
she’s your vessel, you’re her song.

My body tires,
My eyes fixated,
My fingers grasp,
My stubbornness deflated,
My ego shrinks,
My faith petrifies,
My arrogance sinks,
My spirit solidifies,

My love electric, My heart perfected,
My love alive, My heart connected.

Copyright Â© The_Lugubrious_Optimist ... [ 2012-01-06 05:35:14]
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Re: The Feeling - The Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 07:02:55 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Very thought provoking write.
Refreshing to read.
Blessings,
emy

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