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down by the riverside
Contributed by
Apartment213
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Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i must be fine can u feel my heart beating
ive never been lost for words only in ur company
can i be watching t.v. and be with u
breathing by the riverside one day u'll see
one day u'll know what this means
oh maybe i know we'll fall in love by the riverside
once a shaking failure depression riddled fool
once step from breaking out one lesson from combustion
now im feeling possibly lovely covered with u
can i word a night we spend laughing
now im feeling possibly lovely covered with you
breathing by the riverside falling in love with you
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Re: down by the riverside
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 11:58:59 AM AEST
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| this is very pretty and give a beautiful feeling.. im happy for you:) hugs nessa |
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Re: down by the riverside
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 12:10:53 PM AEST
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touching poem
michelle |
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Re: down by the riverside
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 01:36:40 PM AEST
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my dearest kenny, i absolutely love it... *sigh*
Your Angel |
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Re: down by the riverside
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by Metalmouth666 on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 02:00:16 PM AEST
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| very nice, and deep great job |
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Re: down by the riverside
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by SomethingClever on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 03:08:09 AM AEST
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What can I say... it rocks my socks.
Funny how you can show your true emotion to complete strangers... and I'm your best friend, I've never seen this side of you, until I started reading the stuff you post on this site. |
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Re: down by the riverside
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by Broken-glass on
Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 11:22:59 AM AEST
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| wow... fallin in love with an angel.Beautiful. |
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