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An Act of Contrition
Contributed by
Facade
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Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 10:55:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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An Act of Contrition
Elegantly whispered woes
Fall from lips in powerful prose
The lie she knew; the folly of her foes
The unique deception of these and those
And at the end; her journey’s close
An act of contrition, deep felt, now flows
From a life of sin, beauty born, the proverbial rose
From the ashes of death, it grows and grows
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Facade
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2012-01-05 22:55:48]
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Re: An Act of Contrition
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by Daniel_L_Bamberg on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 12:20:48 AM AEST
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Deeply, deeply moving! I sense a realistic but profound resolve in your words. A stinging proclamation to tramplers of hearts and mimics of love. Well organized thoughts cascading with lush poetic temperament.
SUPERB!
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Re: An Act of Contrition
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 01:58:47 AM AEST
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| a beautiful piece. |
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Re: An Act of Contrition
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by girish on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 02:21:20 AM AEST
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| nice compose brief and beautiful |
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Re: An Act of Contrition
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by illuminate_the_shadows on
Tuesday, 10th January 2012 @ 01:14:50 PM AEST
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| I like it. Powerful descriptions and voice. |
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