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~*~HER GREATEST FEAR~*~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 08:34:21 PM in AEST
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~*~
She closes her eyes but no sleep comes
Fear grips her every bone.
She worries so much about the future-
Fearful of the unknown.
She’s not afraid of dying
That’s not her greatest fear.
She’s more fearful of living
And being on her own.
She wonders when the time comes
Who will be there to assist.
Having no children of her own
Makes this fear persist.
~*~
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Re: ~*~HER GREATEST FEAR~*~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 10:22:21 PM AEST
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Oh Jen it's so good to see you here at home. i really missed you.
This is great writing. I think we all fear things like this. You are a beautiful soul, my dear friend. You have raised and touched many children in your life and I'm sure they will all be there to help and then you have your hubby.
Always luv,
emy
Ah yeah and with all your guardian angels will never leave you. Wish we lived closer so we could meet. Still we are great friends and know with out A DOUBTthat I could never have a better friend, |
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Re: ~*~HER GREATEST FEAR~*~
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by angelus8663 on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 10:07:37 AM AEST
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| this is very well written and emy is right, we all share these same fears. Top poem |
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Re: ~*~HER GREATEST FEAR~*~
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 04:23:23 AM AEST
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Aah..! It is a heart touching poem.. But Don't worry,Jenni,
now a days, we have to face so many problems with even our own children..
things are not going well in this world.
love and blessings;-)venkat
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Re: ~*~HER GREATEST FEAR~*~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th June 2012 @ 01:11:07 PM AEST
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I would like to say I can feel her pain but not sure I can. I only know we all feel some pain from something. My list may be infinite.
I do feel sorry for her. Through empathy, do we feel her pain? This did seem real to me and that's a mark of a great writer. Hmmmm...just said the same thing to someone else but doesn't make it any less true.
Great poem.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: ~*~HER GREATEST FEAR~*~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd May 2014 @ 09:07:05 PM AEST
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| Maybe it's not as nice as a hug, but an internet friend is still a friend. Hug. |
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Re: ~*~HER GREATEST FEAR~*~
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by Geneva1223 on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 04:14:44 PM AEST
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| this is the second poem of your i read it really starting to feel like were one of the same... im going to keep reading your poems you give me alot to choose from lol but im hoping to find some charity from it. |
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Re: ~*~HER GREATEST FEAR~*~
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 09:14:36 PM AEST
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Jenni,
It's so nice to be back here, to read your wonderful poetry my friend. What a sad, yet wonderfully penned piece of poetry. Well done my friend. Keep on penning. Keep up with the great work. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. We all truly appreciate it.
~HUGS~
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: ~*~HER GREATEST FEAR~*~
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 10:10:01 PM AEST
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this reads like a song, flowing and so lyrical, very sad
tho, i would bet money she has some friends who will
always be there for her!
hugs n' love nessa |
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