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would you notice
Contributed by
Apartment213
on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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if u will then i will go
if u want me then i promise not to fall apart
if one day can last forever then give us one
one chance to prove the world wrong
and would you notice
and would you notice
if i came to you
would you notice
would you notice
if i knocked on ur window
do u notice
do u notice
i dedicate every word to you
if u will then i wil go
if u want me then i promise not to fall apart
if one day can last forever then give us one
one chance to prove the world wrong
and would u notice
and would u notice
when i come to you
would u notice
would u notice
if i gave the world up for u
do u notice
do u notice
how i want u to notice
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2003-05-04 09:35:00]
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Re: would you notice
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 12:13:47 PM AEST
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Lovely touching write. I enjoy your work.You write them I'll read them.
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Re: would you notice
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 01:38:27 PM AEST
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hey my gorgeous, this one is amazing...you are amazing...i love you
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Re: would you notice
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:23:38 PM AEST
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Me thinks someone is possibly in love. Wonder who that could be? Great poem very touching.
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