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Rays
Contributed by
nluchett
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Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 01:56:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Here comes the sun,
It’s going to rise on over the sea.
It’s like a rising angel,
Going to watch on over me.
We got them daily struggles,
A little bit of love it sets us free.
We feel it from the shore,
Lifting us up into a dream.
Here comes the sun,
It’s going to keep away the rain.
It’s like an energy,
An energy easing down my pain.
Every day it rises,
High up upon the crane,
Warms up the exterior,
And the inside emulates the same.
Copyright ©
nluchett
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2012-01-05 13:56:56]
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Re: Rays
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by Spike on
Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 07:05:58 PM AEST
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a nicely worded, feel-good salutation to the sun, and for me, my backyard, as I get to watch the dawn crest the horizen over the Tasman Sea.
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Re: Rays
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by girish on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 03:00:15 AM AEST
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| nice contribution for sun keep writing keep smiling |
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Re: Rays
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by CARAAAAA on
Wednesday, 7th March 2012 @ 01:04:12 AM AEST
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