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Entangled Fate
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 06:07:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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True beauty set in motion,
these thoughts you set in stone,
tranquility that never ends,
in this place that we call home,
a home that will forever have,
a hold upon our souls,
a brush against entangled fate,
destroyed and then turned cold...
but it will never be forgotten,
even in its death,
for we can never forget love,
our never ending test.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2012-01-05 06:07:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Entangled Fate
(User Rating: 1 ) by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 04:49:13 PM AEST (User
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Better title: Inevitable Fate! As you know,
Only three things will last for all eternity,
Love, Joy and Peace, and the greatest
of these is LOVE! You did an excellent
job here conveying that Biblical message!
Blessings,
Rob |
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