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Unshared Emotion
Contributed by
Alby
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Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 02:57:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I say unto you
As the sun says to the moon,
as lovers say,
I want you,
Need, you, complete me
Desperately, madly
I am falling
Farther and farther
Down a path that I
Can only hope has no end
Wishful thinking lets me
Believe you are falling
but I know you are distant
With feet firmly planted
In a place that is not love
So let me let you leave
Please walk away, as the
Sun will never be with the moon
I will never have
You
Copyright ©
Alby
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2012-01-05 02:57:53]
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Re: Unshared Emotion
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 05:47:40 AM AEST
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| that was a beautiful analogy at the end there. Unrequited love... so sad... and so beautiful. |
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Re: Unshared Emotion
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by girish on
Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 07:08:00 AM AEST
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| good expression of withdrawing love but its not desired |
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