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Make a Stand
Contributed by
ICEKASH
on
Wednesday, 4th January 2012 @ 08:19:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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I am a simple man with a simple plan
Its a simple 'can' if you understand
Join the revolution of the words that i spit
I am trying to make this unift world again fit
How many times we dont think we can
But anyone who changed the world was just a man
Its not the power of the arms its the power of the mind
How can we see your flag high up if your are blind
Dont just think its now time to do
God will guide you if your intentions are true
Now we march we walk with a purpose
We wont give in to this political circus
We are its protector this is our land
Passed the times of sit and talk its time to make a stand
Copyright ©
ICEKASH
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2012-01-04 08:19:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Make a Stand
(User Rating: 1 ) by angelus8663 on
Wednesday, 4th January 2012 @ 08:59:49 AM AEST (User
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I enjoyed this, the structure was sound and the rhyming scheme good. I'm ready to join your revolution :-) |
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