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Fake Plastic World
Contributed by
Shrey
on
Wednesday, 4th January 2012 @ 02:50:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The past is bearing down on me
I can feel it's harsh hands touching me
All the things were so shallow
All things so fake,
Pull me out fr heaven's sake.
Now I get a feeling
Fakeness is in,
Right from jewelry to human being.
It will swallow us whole
It will take us down
We can only watch and frown.
It is like a devil with white angel wings,
it wears a master disguise.
It will pamper us
it will nurture us
it will feed from our soul
till it has fulfilled it's goal.
Immerse your soul in love
Immerse your soul in care
Before we go under
And fade out again...
Copyright ©
Shrey
... [
2012-01-04 02:50:21]
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Re: Fake Plastic World
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by angelus8663 on
Wednesday, 4th January 2012 @ 05:30:59 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this, its a very good commentary on todays consumer driven society - good write |
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Re: Fake Plastic World
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by richard2 on
Wednesday, 4th January 2012 @ 08:14:48 AM AEST
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| Fine writing. I also think this a excellent description of modern society. Much of what people want is driven by overt and subliminal advertising for things that have no real value. |
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Re: Fake Plastic World
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by VILenin on
Wednesday, 4th January 2012 @ 01:52:14 PM AEST
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| I like your poem, and agree that the people today are being driven by material needs and worthless items |
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