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Untitled 3
Contributed by
VILenin
on
Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 05:58:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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No words to say to you
Just images of such rareness
Living inside the realm, Yourself a deity
My only worship, divinity spills from your eyes
Splashes into my heart,
My mind begging for no end
the shallow sea breaks upon your skin,
Lest the tortured sun sets, my eyesight is lost
and I am but one, once more
Copyright ©
VILenin
... [
2012-01-02 17:58:52]
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Re: Untitled 3
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 04:56:04 AM AEST
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| short and sweet nice work |
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Re: Untitled 3
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by candidate on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 07:30:45 AM AEST
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| Short to the point I like it well done |
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Re: Untitled 3
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by 0coin0 on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 08:40:46 AM AEST
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| a lot in a little space..good job |
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