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The Singing Moon
Contributed by
RWood67
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Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 10:54:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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It's in the splash of the light
That twists across your face -
Dancing along the graying fence tops
It's in the flash of teeth chattering
Among the leaves strewn
Across the faded vegetable garden
It's in the tea top clouds that hunger among the stars;
The winds of change that clamor for the harvest
Moon
Shadows of perplexity suggest it's time for a sea change
The pines that flirt among the blue blades agree
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2012-01-02 10:54:30]
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Re: The Singing Moon
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 12:24:47 AM AEST
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| Great expression and imagery running through,I esp like the tea top clouds and the shadows of perplexity,there is a depth of writing which gives it quality and interest. |
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Re: The Singing Moon
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 02:50:03 AM AEST
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| This causes me to feel both wanderlust and nostalgia. It's a very engaging write, thanks for sharing. |
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