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Haiku
Contributed by
candidate
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Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 04:19:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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On the water white and blue
It’s my boat the Haiku
Copyright ©
candidate
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2012-01-02 04:19:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Haiku
(User Rating: 1 ) by dojo1970 on
Sunday, 27th May 2012 @ 11:13:54 AM AEST (User
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good first try, but traditional haiku's are made up of 3 lines each consisting of 1st line 5 syllables 2nd line 7 syllables and 3rd line 5 syllables. |
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