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Hores and Moorland
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candidate
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Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 04:14:27 AM in AEST
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On two powerful rear legs
He reared tall, back arched
And forelegs reaching for sky
Eyes popping forward
From straining sockets
Mane braced 'against violent wind
In a flash he was away
Hoofs barely touching
Wet undulating moor
Moving easy, stride to stride
He forgot the wind for
He was one with the wind.
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Re: Hores and Moorland
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by richard2 on
Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 05:19:24 AM AEST
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| Very compelling, I really like the last verse with its vivid idea. Excellent . |
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Re: Hores and Moorland
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 09:12:34 AM AEST
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Alas, you gave birth to an adult! This write
is top notch! Welcome to YPDC, and a new
and enjoyable pastime! We will enjoy your company very much here in print!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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