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Pneumonia Blue
Contributed by
richard2
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Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 01:49:59 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Pneumonia Blue
The thermometers have left
on quiet feet
this room of sheets
A visitor came down the tubes
to chat of this and that;
of everyday:
He raised his hand as if to say
a word or two
I coughed
and he was blue
pneumonia blue
I saw he had come to see
if I was ready for eternity
(1988)
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2012-01-02 01:49:59]
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Re: Pneumonia Blue
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by candidate on
Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 04:22:38 AM AEST
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Re: Pneumonia Blue
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by Daniel_L_Bamberg on
Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 08:10:36 AM AEST
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An alarming read. I am glad you made the choice to quit. I hope my efforts will one day pay off as well. I've tried to quit several times and each time is better than the last but I am still smoking.
Good Job!
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