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My second sad-sack poem
Contributed by
anonymouse
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Sunday, 1st January 2012 @ 11:15:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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5 years time
since we called it quits
and crossed state lines
which just 5 years before
Id have said is 5 years more
than we would ever be apart for.
It's true that I dont know you anymore
and it's an unfair future you have in store;
eternally shackled to the ghost of disappointment's past
the burdensome baby-father, the unsavory chore,
the email author you'd most like to see last.
So from my insecure self-imposed exile,
ill make this uninvited self-indulgence fast.
Ive come back to haunt you today
merely to say, and probably betray
the harbored inking of love that yet remains,
regardless of the said and done, and come what may,
that the warmth of our two step be remembered,
and not the tings we cannot change.
Copyright ©
anonymouse
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2012-01-01 11:15:14]
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Re: My second sad-sack poem
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by dvtpdw on
Sunday, 1st January 2012 @ 01:19:34 PM AEST
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| I liked this. Being on the receipent end, I enjoyed your use of words. Great job, nice write. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: My second sad-sack poem
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by AngelFox on
Sunday, 1st January 2012 @ 10:09:09 PM AEST
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| Definitely liked it! Enjoyed the flow and the ending. |
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