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Time is running out
Contributed by
Anara
on
Saturday, 31st December 2011 @ 11:12:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Time is running out, for you and I
Slipping away
Before our eyes
My love for you shall never die
Even now i try to survive
Time for a new dawn
I've done nothing wrong
It's as human as it gets
Between you and I
Promise me this wont die
Copyright ©
Anara
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2011-12-31 11:12:38]
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Re: Time is running out
(User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 12th January 2012 @ 12:44:53 AM AEST
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This is a good rhyming poem overall but it
seems a bit contradictory from the begging,
with it's conclusion! Perhaps another verse
would let the reader in to what your true meaning
is! Hope I haven't offended you because that is
never my intention. Helpful advice from my poetry
family on this site has always been appreciated
by me and has helped me to become a much
better writer today than when I first started 12
years ago here!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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Re: Time is running out
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by NightMareShoGun on
Monday, 15th October 2012 @ 02:21:38 AM AEST
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| This has a great rhythm-nightmareshogun(nsg) |
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