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Mistress of your midnight
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 07:39:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It may be the wind whispering in the trees, or it may just be me
Be still in the midst of the eve dear love
you may never really escape.
For when the moon is full
my vision comes to you within your dreams.
You waken, the night stirs, it is me.
Dont fight it, you may never really escape me, I dwell within your soul
We crossed the threshold of daydreams and nightmares
together you and I, we danced fine lines in the sea spray
pledged our hearts forever to the full of the moon.
Eternity wont let go, even if you walked away.
I forever will be, the shadows, the moonglow
the mistress of your midnight.
when you shiver, are you cold? Or is it just me close by?
Sigh once more lover, I am near.......
Copyright ©
shelby
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2011-12-30 19:39:25]
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Re: Mistress of your midnight
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 07:46:59 PM AEST
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Great writing , girl. Good to see you home.
luv ya,
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Re: Mistress of your midnight
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 08:26:06 PM AEST
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| Oh Michelle....I really got into your head with this poem. I can totally identify with it on this particular day!! Wow Grrl, you still write some awesome poems.... Happy New Year to you and yours.....Jen |
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Re: Mistress of your midnight
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 09:15:57 PM AEST
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Provocative, sultry, and captivating!
Good to see you back again here!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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Re: Mistress of your midnight
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by enigma on
Saturday, 31st December 2011 @ 07:37:26 AM AEST
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Wow! A shiver went up my spine. I was going to say a "cold" shiver went up my spine, but after reading your poem, I'm not certain if it was a "cold shiver," or a "hot shiver!" Whichever...it was definitely a "shiver!"
I'm still getting goosebumps! Anyway...you did a great job taking an experience that is common to all of us, adding a little mystery, a little infatuation, a pinch of blind hope, a mountain of raw desire and made what was once "common," spine tinglingly memorable!
I think you know you pulled out all the stops and did a great job, but I'm going to tell you anyway:
You pulled out all the stops and did a Great Job!
ron...enigma...arkay |
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Re: Mistress of your midnight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2012 @ 09:07:55 AM AEST
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Right on, Michelle! Beautiful title, the poem didn't let the your title down. Kudos.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Mistress of your midnight
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by Daniel_L_Bamberg on
Monday, 2nd January 2012 @ 08:03:27 AM AEST
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Amazing, dark, romantic....POWERFUL! It is refreshing to read your work again as it has been a while since I've spent time on YPDC. I am glad to see another familiar name who I can always count on reading and appreciating what is placed before my eyes.
BRAVO!
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Re: Mistress of your midnight
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 02:03:52 PM AEST
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WOW WOW WOW...you definitely have a way with words my friend and you use them so well. It sent shivers down my spine as I was reading it...another wonderful and beautiful write.
Rich |
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Re: Mistress of your midnight
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by doug on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 09:05:48 AM AEST
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| I love , love , love dark poetry. Not so much the suicidal type stuff but more of the sensual dark. Hope to see more like this. I can't say much that's not already been said in the other comments but I will say I enjoy the way you write very much. Please keep writing things like this. truly , Doug |
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Re: Mistress of your midnight
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by Rylo on
Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 02:59:28 PM AEST
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The chills come and go, as my skin does grow cold. In my thoughts in my dreams nothing is what it ever seems. Only reality I have ever seen, was you and I dancing upon a crimson sea.
Beautiful write my friend :) |
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