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The Feeling of Loneliness Revised

Contributed by BritVent on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 01:15:49 PM in AEST
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The feeling of loneliness is her one and only friend. Their friendship seems to most that it won't ever end. Loneliness is always around. Even in a room full of people, the feeling of loneliness is there right beside her.

The feeling of loneliness is her only friend, her only true friend. Her only true friend that doesn't have to pretend. When no one is around, loneliness always knows when to show up, never leaving her side even when she wants it to. Loneliness never seems to know when to give her some space,and back up.

The feeling of loneliness maybe her only friend, but it's also her stalker. Finding every way to make small talk. Always telling her that she only needs loneliness. With loneliness near, nothing else is an option. Not even the one thing she longs for the most happiness. The feeling of loneliness never seems to go away. It makes itself her only choice of pathway.

The feeling of loneliness is so selfish, making itself quite known for its foolishness. It always finds a way to scare happiness away, when I'm trying to get to know love and happiness. The feeling of loneliness gets so jealous, so it will try anything , so it won't get replace by love and happiness.

The feeling of loneliness is a liar, it tells so many lies to get what it want. Loneliness is so arrogant, but it thinks its so brilliant. Telling love and happiness lies so they won't stay. Loneliness told them that she isn't worth it, so they best be on their way. As long as loneliness is around her, love and happiness won't prolong their stay.

The feeling of loneliness maybe her only friend, but it is also her enemy, taking over her body. Making love and happiness think she's all gloomy and gray. The feeling of loneliness is her enemy.

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Re: The Feeling of Loneliness Revised (User Rating: 1 )
by jakereason on Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 02:52:58 PM AEST
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Sounds like the only true company loneliness has is loneliness itself - bleak....

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