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I Come to Odin
Contributed by
VILenin
on
Wednesday, 28th December 2011 @ 08:06:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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They call me the son,
but I want the night to end,
I've seen beyond
and the future looks black,
something is pulling me apart
until I surrender,
Of all my nightmares this one comes true,
Acid filled thoughts out of control
aware my soul is damned,
You think me Insane, but i have no regrets
I've died a thousand deaths,
A surreal world of beings who just can't change,
I crawl on my knees,
Trapped by physical laws,
Could it be worse
I died alone, nothing is real
the last soul in this tragedy,
After a long wait I come to Odin
Copyright ©
VILenin
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2011-12-28 20:06:48]
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Re: I Come to Odin
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by maverick47 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2011 @ 08:40:31 PM AEST
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| Pretty dark stuff but well written |
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Re: I Come to Odin
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by Sam24 on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 03:15:07 AM AEST
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| Very mystical and interesting. I'm kind of a dark person myself, so I really like the style. |
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