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Short
Contributed by
krissy26
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Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 03:01:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here to see me through,
this abyss here i drew.
I drew my own time,
I can't climb.
These walls too steep,
this darkness too deep.
How can I see,
No light would want me.
I drew this upon myself,
To help oneself,
This is impossible,
I have just made myself miserable..
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Re: Short
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 06:08:56 PM AEST (User
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Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Short
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 10:34:25 PM AEST (User
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sounds like your saying you made your bed and now you have to lie in it. this is an awesome write. i can definitely relate to it. |
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