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Is this called love
Contributed by
ravi
on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My heart keeps flying like a dove,
Is this called love?.
I cannot sleep; I cannot eat,
I wait for you hours in blistering heat.
Everyday seems as fresh as dew,
I nowadays dream only of you.
Your teasing laugh rings right to the bone,
I see your gorgeous face in every stone.
Everything around appears so nice,
I see a world without any vice.
I eat shoe polish applied on bread,
the neighbors now evade me in dread.
I get inspired by many an ancient lover,
I smell your fragrance in every flower.
My life is now in complete pell-mell,
every second away from you feels like hell.
I now get medicines in a platter,
my friends call me a mad hatter.
My heart keeps flying like a dove,
Is this called love?.
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2003-05-03 23:25:00]
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Re: Is this called love
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 11:33:15 PM AEST
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ohh what a happy up-beat poem!! i so enjoyed this!!
these lines are great; gave me a huge smile:)
"I now get medicines in a platter,
my friends call me a mad hatter."
keep em' comin'!! hugs nessa |
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Re: Is this called love
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 11:33:27 PM AEST
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once again an enjoyable read...thanks
Shari |
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Re: Is this called love
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by kalika_vidya on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 01:19:32 AM AEST
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| Sure, those are your love symptoms.. enjoyable write..good luck.. Kalika |
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Re: Is this called love
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:36:14 AM AEST
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Great poem! " I cannot sleep; I cannot eat,
I wait for you hours in blistering heat." Don't I know this so well ... you have captured the feelings perfectly. ... Jan |
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