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''Call it a wash''
Contributed by
nluchett
on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 11:46:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There’s a rainfall in the sky,
Exemplifying a deep loneliness he feels inside,
Yet she can ease the pain,
While his freedom remains a heavy weigh,
Reminisce the warm touch in the depths of winter time,
A battle emerges, as the thrill of the chase comes into mind,
A crossroad of choices sits in the wait,
Are we obliged to control our own fate?
Copyright ©
nluchett
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2011-12-27 11:46:13]
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Re: ''Call it a wash''
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 12:43:16 PM AEST
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| Very nice first write. I enjoyed reading it, you expressed the emotion well. Keep on writing. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: ''Call it a wash''
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 07:52:04 PM AEST
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Really good writing. Keep it up.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: ''Call it a wash''
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by richard2 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2011 @ 07:08:15 AM AEST
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| Not bad, Not bad at all, I started scribbling in high school and you are already years ahead of me back then. Be warned, once you start you may never stop. |
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Re: ''Call it a wash''
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by elle on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 06:59:29 PM AEST
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| Hi :) & Welcome! Jump right in! The water is Fine! elle |
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